lilik Rayne

[lilik]

Cbox Name: LilikRayne
Nicknames: Lilik
Main Account: Lilik

Who else do you play?: nobody else yet

How did you find us?: A friend recomended the site to me

Category: Original character

Name: Lilik Rayne

Alias: Lilly

Age: 90

Species: Avaros, A species of birdlike aliens

Ranking: neutral.

Physical Appearance: Beaklike nose, teal skin, with large gold eyes, Her arms and neck are covered in blue green feathers,

Personality: (Rephrased/written) Lilik takes on the personality that best pleases those she's around. If she feels that the appearance best suited for a group is a kind one then she'll do her best to act for the situation. She in reality will do anything she deems will result in her desired outcome. Her real personality is buried beneath many different personas. She has no qualms with killing her friends to reach her goals. Lilik uses her fake side to distance herself from everyone. The only thing she shows a soft side for is birds. She talks to them as though they were capable of understanding her. At times she regrets what she has become.

Powers/Abilities: She has training in hand to hand combat

Equipment: Laser guns, advanced armor,

Weaknesses

Psychological Flaws: A bit on the crazy side,

Physical Flaws: Scars across her entire back and chest

Other Flaws: shes weak to extreme heat, extreme cold, bullets,

Brief History:(expanded) Lilik Rayne was born on the wandering planet of Vagun. A war struck her homeland and her people were almost annihilated. The sight of her species near elimination twisted something in her causing her to become willing to do anything to save her species. Lilik descovered a gem with the ability to change the past. She used the gem and changed the tide of the war. After the war was won Lilik led the genocide of the other side. The gem disappeared. Seeing that she had gone to far Lilik left her home to work as a mercenary.

RP sample (in character)
Lilik Rayne looked around the new ship she was stationed on and sighed rolling her firey gold eyes. To think that what she needed was here made her groan internally. How was she ever to find the thing she needed on this wreck? Suddenly Lilik heard the captain of the ship behind her. She smiled turning to the captain. " Its lovely and so homey." she lied with the warmest fake grin she could muster. 'what a smuck' she thought to herself as the captain shook her hand while smiling at her with a toothless grin. She flashed her best 'kind crewmember' face saying " I'm just absolutely ecstatic to be working here" as the chef. The old captain begin to ramble on how she was such a sweet girl. Lilik couldn't help thinking 'I wish I didn't have to deal with this old ugly man' while she kept up the act.

[Regina Mills]

Hey Lilik, and welcome to the site! So from what I can tell, it looks like you've got a pretty neat character concept here. There are just a few more things that need to be added before we can accept this.

For the ranking, the options are either Hero, Anti-Hero, Neutral, Law Enforcement, Villain, or Civilian, so just pick one of those! And I'd like to see a bit more elaboration on the personality section - we like to see at least a paragraph or two. Even though she's cruel, does she have any soft spots or redeeming features? Why is she the way she is? How does she act around different people - does she act nice around everyone, or are there some people she drops the act around? Just to give you some ideas.

Lastly, we do require an RP sample, so just add one of those please!

Once this is done, an admin will take another look. Thank you!

[lilik]

Okay thank you very much! I'll be sure to make those changes.

[lilik]

Edited now

[Regina Mills]

Thanks for making those changes, everything looks good! Accepted!