Monobindi
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judy ftw
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Belle
Mar 2, 2013 12:16:41 GMT -5
Post by Monobindi on Mar 2, 2013 12:16:41 GMT -5
Hello Flem, and welcome to Afterhour Mayhem!
It's so great to see someone interested in taking up Belle. ^^ However, there are just a few things that need to be fixed before she can be accepted! I'd like to see a bit more length on her personality. Delve into her more independent, adventurous side! Or maybe she's a bit more cautious around people now that she's been locked up for so long? There's quite a bit more to her than her outward friendly personality, and we'd love to see more about that - get beneath the surface! There's plenty left to talk about!
Belle also does have some abilities, I would say, just not combat ones. She took care of Rumpelstiltskin's palace for months, so she would have some cleaning and cooking skills, at least.
We also really prefer to see a few more flaws in our apps - either psychological or physical, and we'd like to see them explained, as well.
When those changes are made, a staff member will look over your app again. Thank you!
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Belle
Mar 2, 2013 12:30:01 GMT -5
Post by belle on Mar 2, 2013 12:30:01 GMT -5
And finished! :3<3.
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Monobindi
New Member
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judy ftw
Posts: 14
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Belle
Mar 2, 2013 22:35:42 GMT -5
Post by Monobindi on Mar 2, 2013 22:35:42 GMT -5
Thanks for adding to her personality and skills! I'd still like to see a few more additions to her flaws, however. We typically do not like to accept characters without seeing at least a few psychological and physical flaws each, as well as small paragraphs to explain those flaws. Check out a few other apps to see what I mean if you're having trouble! Thank you!
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Belle
Mar 3, 2013 1:30:27 GMT -5
Post by belle on Mar 3, 2013 1:30:27 GMT -5
I hope she's okay now and to your liking! *hides in a closet near by*
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